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Will you come love?

July 14th, 2010 by praveenpuglia.
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Let me express my feelings,
beneath the blue, above the green,
where the path asks me to walk,
with the whole of GOD’s blessings.

I dive in the sea to wake me up,
I see the sun down like the ones above,
I have lost the way, the way to love,
I find no one to help me out.

Then I see you, with a hope in heart
You give your hand to take me up,
but the earth come down to the deepest,
far from you, where i drop down hard.

The darkness spreads and makes me blind,
I search for a way but I fail to find,
the rocks come closer, to crush me down,
Will you come love, to make me fine?

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3 Responses to “Will you come love?”

  1. wordsworthfan says:

    loved the last para ..and the optimism shining through between those clouds of pessimism

  2. thanks wordsworthfan…:)

  3. dollsinatank says:

    i really like this poem, it’s dark and awesome yet hopeful as well. great work. 1 suggestion, third to last line: maybe ‘i search for a way that i can’t find’, just to make it smoother?
    keep it up ur awesome :)

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