When I first saw you I was in love with you
As the time passed my love for you grew
People said it’s the beauty you are looking into
Or it’s just an infatuation
It could only be love I knew
I can smell some scents in her hair
Definitely love was in the air
People said these were the things that be used to
It could only be love I knew
I changed from action movies to romantic
Funny to dramatic
Things were changing (in a good way) around me
People said this is all about your view
It could only be love I knew
Just one look of her sets my pulses to race
Whenever I gazed upon that face
My face use to turn blue
People said these all things r not true
Now it is love I knew
wonderful description of the situation of falling in love……..keep it up
nice ring to the whole poem..well written
thanx 4 ur wonderful feedback……
well its only love…. love and love…. u never know untill it flies away…. so don’t just feel it say it… and be it !!!!!
i already said it Dr. pritesh bt it seem love is nt as kind as v r
wow..that is so beautifully written..it almost flows..great expression!!
thank u Shruti. i didn’t expectd so much appriciation 4 u guys. it means lot 2 me….
this is super stuff..dude..keep them coming !!
thanx man. i ve already cm up wit sm more work. plz do read it n lemme knw hw is it…
love love love i love ur poem, i can relate.. ifyouknowhaimean
no i cudn’t understand wat u r tryin 2 say. i m a nt gud guesser……..
kya yar faltu ki AB Ab ki rhythim mar rahe ho.