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I wonder why

March 9th, 2010 by Divyansh.

I wonder why

Immense pain is unleashed

But there is not a single tear in the eye

When I am sad and I cry

I wonder why

I can’t fall asleep, I roll over from one side to other

Even for 6 hour on the bed I lay

I wonder why

I open up with my friends

But in front of parents I lie

I wonder why

I don’t get the results

Luck is screwing with me

No matter how much I try

I wonder why

I am lying on the surface

Hurt wounded betrayed

Instead I should fly high in the sky

Hundreds of days gone by

Wondering about why

After wondering all this nothing going to change

Still I wonder why

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6 Responses to “I wonder why”

  1. swapnil says:

    i wonder why………its a nice poem

  2. swapnil says:

    I wonder why……….its a nice poem

  3. gillian says:

    i wonder why anyone votes for this crap

  4. Divyansh says:

    if u don’t knw understand poetry den dats nt ma prob so shut up n 1 more jst 4 ur knowledge ma poem had been on d top 4 lyk 2 weeks on d same site

  5. dagmar says:

    as a longtime critic & editor i have to say that this & all yr writing is amateurish drivel & in the UK or US wouldn’t get a C in a highschool writing class…… thank god there is some real poetry on this site & re the above ,just because some idiots vote for you doesn’t make you a poet & don’t think that you are because you are not …perhaps you & your friends should start reading some of the classics on this page or published poets to know what poetry is

  6. divyansh says:

    in ma defense i jst wana say first of all tat d place frm whr i come english is nt so popular. second i lyk 2 rite in simple language coz common people cn understand. i mean u ve got gud vocab bt other poeple don’t. initially wen i startd readin poems i usd 2 tink watevr he has ritten is gud bt i cn’t understand ny ting so i don’t want people 2 say tat. if u tink its tat bad i ll nt rite ny more

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