IN SEARCH OF………
There was sunshine,
There were dewdrops,
There was fantasy,
There was a cup of coffee,
There was peace of mind,
There was laughter,
There was roaming here and there.
All of these were there,
‘Cause you were there;
You were everything,
You were in all of these.
Still the sun shines,
The dew drops gather over the grass-tip,
Still I fantasize,
Fumes come out from the cup of coffee,
And how could you expect the peace of mind?
Now I just chuckle at time,
But still I roam here and there.
I know, all of these are meaningless
To you and even to the whole world.
But I’m still in search of the meaning,
Of all these meaningless thoughts.
Time passes by……………………………………
dude..not able to read properly please change the font or the background!!
Now I’ve changed the theme, let’s see whether it’s possible for you and other people as well to read it properly or not………….
really nice lines bro..I guess ‘her’ made everything relevant..and when she’s gone..same things lose their meaning!!
the first para had a nice rhythm to it
The more you rest your life in one single person, the more meaningless it becomes on their exit from it. Well expressed !
@rahul, thanx a lot for your kind attention to my first post…………
You’re right my brother, that’s the only her presence which made every little things meaningful, but when she disappears from the sphere of life everything seems like nothing, it’s just like a bunch of tuberose without the fragnance……………
@dragonknight, hmm you’ve got me right
thanks for your comment, expecting more…………
your “wishing for a tryst” fixed your poem in the college magazine… and now this… forget the poem… whom are these dedicated to buddy??
great re…very very nicely expressed…excellent!!
@sayanidi, thanx a loooottttt…….
@Anirbanda, that’s a secret bro, can’t reveal it in the net, tell you ’bout it ‘AKANTO GOPONE’, you see…………….
@mr poet…. my query didnt get answered!
@mr inquisitive………….isn’t my reply fair enough to answer your question in a diplomatic way???????????????????????
@Sav_oblived: Glad I was able to get the concept right. But I believe the credit goes to you only, for expressing it well enuf for everyone to understand
You keep the poems coming, I would keep the comments coming
just jaa taa (supper rocking)
A great romance expressed in a fantastic way…
Very true..Nicely expressed…only when someone dear moves out from your life…you come to realise all other things had been just materialistic…what mattered more was their presence!! And still ..it will go on carrying on with that meaningless search!
@Simi….thanks a lot for your comments in this note
You’ve got me absolutely right………..