when a heart cries…
I remember the day when i cried hard in your lap,
I opened my heart in front of you,
it was shattered,
but you blowed life in it,
I was not on earth that I found you,
You made my life meaningful,
Yeah, you made it,
You added the brightest color on the canvas of
my life,
Oh! How happy I was,
Yeah, I was,
I was flying in the valley of love,
Life was so beautiful,
So melodious it was,
I was breathing you,
You were in me,
I was sure you would always be like that only,
You promised me that way,
Didn’t you?
So where your love has gone now,
I cannot feel you in me anymore,
Why have you gone so far?
Why have I become dear from dearest for you?
Why did you break your promise?
What is my mistake?
Is that my fault that I loved you so much?
Or is this what me and my love deserve?
Whatever it may be,
I promise you one thing
That this heart will never
ever love anyone like that,
yeah not even to you,
the canvas will always remain incomplete
and those days will always be remembered
by me…
wow..awesome poetry poem really a nice , soulful picture painted..all I will say is life is about moving and creating a beautiful painting on the canvas..as the canvas is too precious to be wasted on someone who breaks promises.
yeah… canvas is very precious but the one who has broken his/her heart is the most important part of his/her life that he/she can afford letting the canvas incomplete in his/her memories… those memories has painted the most beautiful pictures on the canvas…. though the poet wanted to complete his/her canvas with his/her beloved love but when he/she is not there he/she will not complete the canvas… it will remain always incomplete… no other colors can complete the picture….
well I believe the heart i.e. the canvas is just way too precious to be left broken..for some one who doesn’t deserve the poetry is great…but life is about moving on ..so the canvas should be painted
yeah……. but it will definitely take a long time for this……
Few of the poems where the positives and negatives both are mentioned. Good that its not only what happened after but also before the promises were broken. That is why the hatred is there but the love hasn’t left!
yes.. hatred is there but love hasn’t left yet….
excellent work aarti……….u knw wat i cn picturize myself in tat…..so well ritten……
@divyansh: thanks so much.. yes all broken hearts has almost the same pain.. we can actually feel others pain if we have also suffered from that phase..
very true……tats d reason i ve become poet…:-). issi baat par ek sher arz hai( achha nhi hai kyonki abhi abhi banaya hai).
bewaafi ki hamare pyaar ne humse
aur hume befawa ka naam diya
hume to kalam pakadna b thik se nhi aata tha aur
is zalim zamane ne hume shayar ka naam diya.
if u need more elborate explaination u cn follow dis link- http://simplypoet.com/potpourri/meri-dastaan/
subhaan-allah! bahot khoob! see every bad thing has something positive in it. your broken heart has made you a poet.. the pain is good if you learn something from it and move forward to achieve more..
tats d prob i m stuck wit it……n donno hw 2 get out of it. tats y u ll observe tat most of ma poems ( if u l read tat)r on pain alone n all tat. waise ye subhaan-allah ye sade hue sher ke liye tha ya poem ke liye…?
hmmm…. i can understand. it takes time to come out of it.. but time heals everything. and subhaan-allah was for the pain which made you a poet..
its true dat it takes time 2 heel bt wat if u r bein hurt continously….u cn’t heel lyk tat……u won’t understand….leave tat…….if u wana read ma poem den search 4 divyansh on dis website. plzzz don’t read more dan 3 at a tym….u ll get ma disease(of bein sad
)……..n plz do leave sm comment 4 me… 