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Before Her Last breath!

February 4th, 2010 by Simi Aboobacker.

Seconds has changed our life,

Amongst us word partying had become rife,

An hour before, enjoying with all over a drink there,

And now lying down in this wreck alone out here,

With all the blood stained glass shattered criss-cross,

I could see her far across!

Grasping for my breathe,

I struggled to reach out to her, to sheathe -

My legs had gone dead,

First time in my life, I put out my hands in a plead-

“Oh God, Give me another chance -,

In the last few seconds, whole of my life came in a glance!

If not I had drunk and drove

I could have saved her and our love!!”

But, all my prayers went in a vain-

Leaving me alone to witness her in this pain!

Opening my eyes turning out to be an endeavor,

Least known, it’s going to be closed forever!!

I could hear her crying in agony far,

With tears rolling down, All I could say “Oh, dear, I am sorr….”

Conceding the people to say –

In that pool of blood, is where the drunk driver and his pregnant wife lay!!

*** PLEASE DON’T MIX DRINKING WITH DRIVING AS YOUR LIFE IS IMPORTANT FOR YOUR FAMILY!! ***

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6 Responses to “Before Her Last breath!”

  1. dragonknight says:

    beautifully expressed! often people do not realise the consequences of their actions unless they are on their near and dear ones. But by then, its often too late. A beautiful poem to express an equally beautiful message.

  2. Thanks a lot for that comment !! :)
    It’s quite true that we understand things very late!

  3. sunny says:

    wow..a message so beautifully and elegantly put across !!

  4. Scorpion says:

    nicely told
    liked it

  5. Simi Aboobacker says:

    @ Sunny, thank you so much for that comment! :)

    @ Scorpion, thank you…. Nice to know that its being liked by some!

  6. rahul says:

    wow..just loved reading it..awesome !!

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